Unfortunately, it’s a research paper and not an academic essay addressing the various aspects of an issue in controversy.  It would help if you thought about why COVID-19 is so controversial and contentious and frame a thesis that addresses this topic.  You can then use all of this excellent research to support the thesis.  I’ve suggested a possible direction to take in my comments on your paper; take a look at this and see if it helps you re-direct this essay to meet the assignment’s expectations.

Please let me know if you have questions.  This is a fine topic, and your research is excellent; you need to reframe it in the context of controversy, however, and not just produce a summary of the recent research.  Do you see the difference?

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